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-date = "2019-10-07T23:48:00+05:30"
+date = "2019-10-08T04:00:00+05:30"
 title = "yuzu Patreon Release October 2019"
 author = "CaptV0rt3x"
 forum = 150506
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-Heya ***yuz-ers***!
-Wanna know what we have in store for you?
-The October Patreon preview release!
-This build showcases the new game in town, **The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening**!
-Hop right in, to know more.
+Hey there ***yuz-ers***!
+Curious about what we have in store for you?
+It's the October Patreon preview release!
+This build showcases the new game in town, **The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening**, in yuzu!
+Hop right in to find out more.
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 ## Changelog
@@ -25,20 +25,19 @@ While some of the changes listed below are already in master or tagged for Canar
 - [#2873](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2873) - Implemented `ioctl2` & `ioctl3` interfaces in `NVDRV` (Nvidia Services).
 - [#2912](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2912) - Fixes and Improvements to Asynchronous GPU:
   
-  * New games boot with `Async` - Fire Emblem: 3 Houses, Cadence of Hyrule, and Pokken Tournament.
+  * New games boot with `Async` - **Fire Emblem: 3 Houses**, **Cadence of Hyrule**, and **Pokkén Tournament**.
   * Fixed the issue where games would suddenly slowdown and report wrong framerates.
   * Fixed the issue where some games would surpass frame limiting.
-  * Fixed the issue where dynamic resolution re-scaler would trigger in **Super Mario Odyssey** with full-speed and won't trigger heavily for under-speed games.
-  * Removed artificial fence which limited `Async` to 9ms. 
+  * Fixed the issue where dynamic resolution re-scaler would trigger in **Super Mario Odyssey** with full-speed and wouldn't trigger heavily for under-speed games.
+  * Removed artificial fence which limited `Async` to `9 ms`. 
   Now `Async` will be limited by the game and this gives performance boosts in many graphic intensive games.
-&nbsp;
 
 `Patreon Changes`
 
 - Implemented a new `Fair Cycle Core Timer` in order to spread work evenly on the four emulated cores.
-- Improved the `New Scheduler` even further, by fixing bugs and implementing Thread Pre-emption.
-  These improvements to the scheduler have improved performance in games like **Fire Emblem:3 Houses**, **Hyrule Warriors** and **Resident Evil 4**. 
-  It also has allowed Astral Chain and other games to boot (***Not fully playable yet!***).
+- Improved the `New Scheduler` even further, by fixing bugs and implementing `Thread Pre-emption`.
+  These improvements to the scheduler have improved performance in games like **Fire Emblem:3 Houses**, **Hyrule Warriors** and **Resident Evil 4**. <br>
+  It also has allowed **Astral Chain** and other games to boot (***Not fully playable yet!***).
   
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     "./AC 1.png| Astral Chain"
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 `Public Changes`
 
-- [#2891](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2891) - Implemented `RGBX16F Format` which is used by **Rocket League** to render Graphics. 
-- [#2870](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2870) - Implemented an `MME Draw calls inliner` which unifies instances draw calls into many a single draw call, improving performance significantly in some titles. 
+- [#2891](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2891) - Implemented `RGBX16F Format` which is used by **Rocket League** to render graphics. 
+- [#2870](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2870) - Implemented a `MME draw calls in-liner` which accumulates draw calls from the Macro Interpreter Engine (MME) and sends them as a single unified draw call, thus improving performance significantly in some titles. 
 - [#2869](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2869), [#2878](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2878), and [#2855](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2855) - Implemented shader instructions: `SULD`, `ICMP`, `SHFL`(Nvidia only) and `SUATOM`.
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-- `Fix` - Fixed Memory mapping so that it won't call GPU flushing unnecessarily anymore. 
+- [#2872](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2872) - Fixed memory mapping so that it won't call GPU flushing unnecessarily anymore. 
 - [#2868](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2868) - Fixed mipmap filtering. 
-- [#2833](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2833) - Fixed Stencil testing. 
+- [#2833](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2833) - Fixed stencil testing. 
 - [#2914](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2914) - Corrected `Fermi2D` to work within crop areas in order to avoid issues in Vulkan.
 - [#2917](https://github.com/yuzu-emu/yuzu/pull/2917) - Added deduction method for `blits` which helps figure if a `blit` is on depth textures. 
 This avoids using the fall-back method of buffer copy.
-&nbsp;
 
 `Patreon Changes`
 
-- Implemented `fast BRX` (aka evil shaders) and fixed `TXQ`. 
+- Implemented `fast BRX` and fixed `TXQ`. 
 This fixes graphics in **Crash Team Racing** & **The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening**, and also makes shaders a lot easier to be read by AMD and Intel drivers.
-- Reworked Shader Cache system to support `fast BRX` and `TXQ` fixes.
+- Reworked shader cache system to support `fast BRX` and `TXQ` fixes.
 
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     "The Legend of Zelda: Link's Awakening"
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 A save file is being linked here for users' convenience `-->` <a href="./savedata1.bin">Click here to Download</a>
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-{{< message "Shader Caches need to be regenerated!!" >}}
+{{< message "Shader caches need to be regenerated!!" >}}
 Because of the reworked shader cache system, all previously generated shader caches are `no longer valid`.<br>
 **Users will have to regenerate their shader caches for all games.**
 {{</ message >}}